I dreamed of a house by the water,
down near the river’s edge.
Where even the wind was silent;
stilled were the voices in my head.
It was such an odd sensation
and I didn’t know what to feel;
far from my chaotic life;
in this land, oddly surreal.
So I figured I’d enjoy it
under the shade of a nearby tree.
Meditate and listen to
what the river was saying to me.
In a voice no more than a whisper
it recounted tales to me;
arguments of video games
and shoes caught in a tree.
I felt my face frown at first,
sub-consciously of course.
Glanced at my surroundings
and gave a little snort.
Not deterred at all you see,
not even the wind seemed to care!
On went the story-telling
of the tangle of gum and hair.
I surprised myself just then
with the beginnings of a smile.
Gust of wind, a gentle nudge
and I guffawed at the child.
The memory of pouting face
with just a touch of fear.
If not for the fun she’d had,
I’m sure she would have shed a tear.
As the river continuously recounted
things I so often yelled about,
I couldn’t help my reaction
as I laughed and rolled about.
My house is such a curious thing
with distractions of the oddest kind;
not an ounce of reprieve daily.
It’s a wonder I have my mind!
But here things seem less serious
than the punishments I have served.
Out here, such stunts made me laugh
where I would have issued a harsh word.
When the river’s tale was done
and my laughter settled down,
there was a valuable lesson learned.
I love having them around!
For all the insane antics
that cause me to yell so,
I would miss them dearly
if they weren’t around, you know?
The saddest feeling hit me then.
I began to feel quite lonely.
The shade felt way too cold
and the river felt a lot less homey.
Atmosphere shifting, eyes aflutter,
an imp just broke the shutter.
A small grin an outright laugh,
small lips began to stutter.
No matter what the prank and cost,
these distractions are dear to me.
I’d rather this house than the other one,
down where the river speaks.
© Day Dreamer
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July 18th, 2012 at 4:16 PM
It sounds as if the tales the river told were thoroughly enjoyed. Sometimes, I think, we need to sit back and just listen to the ‘rivers’ in our lives. And it does feel good to laugh, doesn’t it? Thanks for participating in Poetry Jam where so many of us are gathering at the river this week.
July 19th, 2012 at 10:20 PM
You’re right…It does feel good to let the steam off and laugh once in a while.
July 18th, 2012 at 4:33 PM
What a lovely story….rhymes were great, as well as the pic of the spot that you thot you’d like, but opted for fun family….nice job…
July 19th, 2012 at 10:19 PM
Thank you…you’d wonder why I ever chose my house if you actually experienced my house
July 18th, 2012 at 4:53 PM
nice…even your words emulate the river….and it is good to reflect on those things..the things that set us off in the day and how silly they are at times…and then let them go knowing we have tomorrow to do it better….
July 19th, 2012 at 10:18 PM
It’s hard in that moment when you have children fighting and you know you have to be the disciplinarian and teach them that every time is not play time. Then we can come off too harsh…
July 18th, 2012 at 7:06 PM
Love that last line! Great job!
July 19th, 2012 at 10:17 PM
Thank you Linda!
July 18th, 2012 at 7:12 PM
Water is quite magical, isn’t it
A lovely read.
July 19th, 2012 at 10:16 PM
Thank you sweetie!
July 18th, 2012 at 7:38 PM
Such an important message herein, Bren, delivered creatively as well!
July 19th, 2012 at 10:16 PM
Thank you Hannah. It’s a lesson I try to remember.
July 18th, 2012 at 8:30 PM
I dream of living in a cabin by the water, maybe one day. Your poem is epic ~ and good!
July 19th, 2012 at 10:14 PM
Thank you Helen!
July 19th, 2012 at 7:44 AM
There are a lot of mysteries around rivers. You’ve made them beautiful with your verse. Nice write!
Hank
July 19th, 2012 at 10:13 PM
Thank you for your words Hank.
July 19th, 2012 at 8:25 AM
Yes, that looks like a good place to sit and think..i loved the mix of magic and memory..the video games and shoes all tangled up..jae
July 19th, 2012 at 10:13 PM
LOL….all true I assure you! My favorite saying: video games are the bane of my existence!
July 19th, 2012 at 2:16 PM
Ah the mysteries of the river. Lovely work!
July 19th, 2012 at 10:11 PM
Thank you!
July 19th, 2012 at 3:18 PM
A lovely dream, but a lovable reality!
Kay, Alberta, Canada
July 19th, 2012 at 10:28 PM
Thanks Kay!
July 19th, 2012 at 3:53 PM
This was mesmerizing. I wanted to be part of that world and was surprised when you preferred your own house to the one that was magical. Perhaps the experience was the pick me up you needed to face life anew?
July 19th, 2012 at 10:11 PM
It always is just as surprising to me
Noise all the time, I just want to get away, but then the minute I’m away, I want to come back.
July 19th, 2012 at 4:54 PM
unique take on the prompt, listening to the river and learning from it, lovely poem
July 19th, 2012 at 10:10 PM
Thank you
July 19th, 2012 at 5:59 PM
I like the growing awareness of preferring the busy noisy house to the silent shore…….
July 19th, 2012 at 10:10 PM
Do you ever get that feeling when you’re alone and the house is silent, that things are too quiet?
July 19th, 2012 at 8:27 PM
I have tried form time to time to find a place and be by myself for real. It takes me quite some time to exorcise the demons (voices in my head) and its strange just how noisy our minds are from the day to day clutter. I identified with this on a very high level…and the missing and loving of what we have is only amplified by being by ourselves. Loved this.
July 19th, 2012 at 10:08 PM
I sit on the beach and listen to the water or go to a waterfall that I know of. As long as the water is loud enough and I can close my eyes…it helps. Thank you for your words.
July 20th, 2012 at 4:13 AM
As a civilization, and I use that word with reservations, we are losing the ability to hear nature, rivers, forests, the wind & rain, when it speaks to us.
July 20th, 2012 at 1:59 PM
That is true in some cases…which is why we have to take time to commune with nature.
July 20th, 2012 at 4:32 AM
Once you become a empty nester and there is no noise because you are alone and hubby is at work, well that is the time that one must either embrace being able to be alone or go crazy with all the silence and alone time. I think it also makes the visits from your children and the grandchildren all the more special. But at the same time it is also great to send them all home. I guess also it is good to fill the nest with animals to which one can talk to and not sound crazy and when hubby comes home and wants to talk and talk and you are the only one there, then you also realize how much the young ones are missed by him. I think the thought of living by a lake is great but then I think I would feel too lonely with no neighbors to cause distractions. I too think I would choose to enjoy the family instead of choosing to be alone. This poem flowed and an enjoyable laughter along with leading one on a ride.
Thanks for sharing such a cool poem with us at Theme Thursdays distractions.
God bless.
July 20th, 2012 at 2:00 PM
Thank you so much. I have thought about what it would be like with everyone moving out of the house, but not having experienced it yet, I don’t know how I’d feel.
July 21st, 2012 at 12:30 AM
Also a Mama, I love this poem! I feel it’s truth for me, too!! ^_^
July 21st, 2012 at 9:19 AM
Thank you Tori
July 21st, 2012 at 1:57 AM
i much like the river as a tool that carries part of the own emotions and how it reflects your heart and feelings in this. it feels like this state of subconsciousness, the in between lines that come to the surface
July 21st, 2012 at 9:22 AM
It is often when we’re not sure of how we feel, that we go somewhere alone and let the most prevalent emotion speak to us.
July 21st, 2012 at 10:21 AM
This speaks so much to the mother in me! While I would love sitting next to the river enjoying the quiet, nothing feeds my soul more than time with my daughter. Wonderfully written!
July 21st, 2012 at 10:31 AM
Thanks so much Mary
July 21st, 2012 at 1:42 PM
Whether the lake house feels homey or not, the scene is beautiful and I’d like to go for a visit.
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July 21st, 2012 at 2:48 PM
Thanks Joyce
July 23rd, 2012 at 5:05 PM
“On went the story-telling
of the tangle of gum and hair.
I surprised myself just then
with the beginnings of a smile.
Gust of wind, a gentle nudge
and I guffawed at the child.
The memory of pouting face
with just a touch of fear.”
How I loved reading this poem! Moving from the grin to the guffaw, from relaxing to missing the distractions. You took me with you to the end! Thank God for the mini-vacations that allow you/me to see what we love–and then return.
July 24th, 2012 at 6:49 AM
Thank you so much Susan!
July 24th, 2012 at 3:40 AM
Evocative – and if you can evoke a river, you have me in the palm of your hand. Well done.
July 24th, 2012 at 6:51 AM
(huge grin) Thank you David! I don’t think I have that power just yet.
July 24th, 2012 at 7:17 PM
This image you have chosen is perfect with your words.
July 24th, 2012 at 8:14 PM
Thank you
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July 25th, 2012 at 11:10 AM
sometimes you just take stock and realize dreams aren’t as good as reality.
July 25th, 2012 at 3:13 PM
True indeed! Thank you!