Merciless.
Shadowed secrets
roam sidewalks… questioning.
Begging permission… forbidden fruit…
Yes or no? Enticed seduction
tastes the whispers of your lips.
Curves shimmer, flames in darkness. Embarrass innocence…
Beguiling wiles backfire, missed the long goodnight kiss.
Lady in red seduces, but still holds herself elegant.
©Daydreamer
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Ah, she definitely IS a seductress….and I can see that it would be VERY hard to say NO to this elegance!
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Thank you Mary! I couldn’t resist the picture.
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nicely done
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Thank you Sheilagh!
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This is wonderful! Love the seductive nature of the poem.
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Thank you Teresa!
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Nice combination of prompts… love it!
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Thank you Laurie ;)!
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Clever weaving of words ~ She does look elegantly seductive ~
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Thank you very much!
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tastes the whisper of your lips…nice….def a seductive subject…and you cant win them all can you…smiles.
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So true! Thanks Brian!
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You’ve created a scene here—visceral and provocative.
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Thank you!
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The pic says a thousand words. A seductive seductress. Woe the seduced male! Great take!
Hank
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Thank you very much Hank
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I can feel the seduction in this–and in the photo too. Yes or no–the eternal question.
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Thanks for stopping by Peggy! It is a seducing photo.
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i like her dress…smiles..and oh the male that manages to say no to her…bowing before him..smiles
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smiles…thank you!
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Good to see you back again Bren. You have been missed. Aha the seductive powers with a little help from the wardrobe department:)
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Thank you for stopping by, but I think you confuse me with the Daydreamer of Soul Speak. Sorry but I am not Bren. She is an excellent writer though!
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Oops…faux pas!
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No worries! 🙂
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That last line… still holds herself elegant… prompts admiration. What a woman!
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Thank you Kim. It is just something about the lighting and her pose in the picture that gets me!
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so beautiful!
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Thank you Uzoma
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Lovely poem…so seductive.
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Thank you Susie!
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A most seductive post. Nice one.
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Thank you Anthony!
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Use it or lose it…!
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LOL indeed! Thank you for stopping by!
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Lovely poem, so in sync with the beautiful photograph. Nice!
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Thank you Lisa!
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Beautiful, sexy poem
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Thank you! The picture gave me inspiration!
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Holds herself elegant! Nice and true! thanks
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Thank you Izzy!
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Good grief. Am I reading this right? You did SEVEN prompts in one poem?
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LOL It was only six. Thanks for stopping by!
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Great combination of all the prompts! It’s fun when they all somehow can tie together!
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That is always the best part! Thank you for reading!
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Good for the lady who holds her elegant head high!!!
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Indeed! Thank you for stopping by!
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wow…liked the sensual touch…
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Thanks!
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Seduction is her power, and she holds it elegantly. Well done!
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Thank you Shanyn! I’m glad you liked it!
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… love the words ‘begging permission’ … great write!!
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Thank you so much Helen!
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I enjoyed your sexy interpretation of the words. You really do think in pictures!
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Thank you so much! I really do! I can be oblivious to a lot of things, but if I walk into a room and the picture is different from the previous one in my mind’s eye, I know something has changed. 🙂
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Wow! That may be inarticulate, but it’s my first reaction! Nicely done!
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LOL Thank you Karen!
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both image and words a bit mysterious.
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Thank you Margaret!
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Mysterious, yes, and evocative.
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Thank you for your kind words!
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The pairing of “seduction” and “elegance” is very often the case. It’s elegant to indulge in the ART of seduction – and sort of trashy to just pick someone up. Me? I’ve done both over the years!! So I’m not saying anything I don’t say about myself (wink). Fun, sexy, and mmmmm. Peace, Amy http://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/02/07/dads-dynamic-deeds/
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Thanks for your insight Amy!
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a sweet seductress this write embodies. nicely done!
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Thank you RMP!
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I see a woman older than the one in the picture when I experience this piece. Some beauty faded, some stolen, yet her elegance is fair traded for her loss. I even imagined her home. What I read is only a fraction of the world and character you have created. Marvelous!
~The Keeper
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Thank you very much Keeper! I always enjoy hearing what pictures my writing causes in the minds of my readers.
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she does, doesnt she…Lovely one here
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Thank you!
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Oh if we all only looked like that then we would have a world full of seductresses. And I think there would be a world full of men who enjoyed being seduced. I loved your poem and truly women in red can be the greatest seductresses of them all. There is just something about the color red such as how a red car seems to seduce men too.
Thank you for sharing such great words to go with a wonderful picture for this weeks Theme Thursday. May your weekend be filled with lots of seductive pictures of which we are the beneficiaries.
God bless.
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Blessing back to you. Thank you for taking the time to read it. I agree that red is alluring in any form.
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Ah, besotted the senses with subtle seductive powers of sensuous words! Night or day, only a dreamer can spin such dreamy poetry. Lovely!
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“Beguiling wiles backfire” damn.
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🙂 Thank you
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How well shadowed secrets match your illustration! A perfect partnership.
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Thank you! I almost didn’t see the comment as it went into the spam folder. I’m glad I did though!
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A delicious piece
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I am glad you enjoyed it!
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an elegant seductress, how do you resist?
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Good question Emma! Thanks!
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Hallo,
This is for you, for being kind to others and me, http://www.bigcards.nl/card/pickup/bc-c7cf3c10/
Sweet Valentine greetings, Summer
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Thank you Summer!
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You’re welcome : ) And thanks to you too
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can seduction be anything but elegant
kooky kinesthetics
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Some would say yes 🙂
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Oh boy. Been there!
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giggles…Thank you
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Einen schönen Sonntag wünsche ich dir und danke für deinen Besuch auf meinem Blog ganz viele liebe Grüße Klaus
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Vielen Dank Klaus! Segen für Sie, wie gut!
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Liebste Day eine schöne Karwoche und ein glückliche Tag sei ganz lieb gegrüßt Klaus
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Ein sehr sexy Foto so schön und verführerisch,einfach super,ein schönen Tag wünsche ich dir und sei ganz herzlichst gegrüßt Klaus
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Danke so sehr Klaus
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Wünsche dir eine schöne gute Nacht und sei herzlichst gegrüßt Klaus
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